I'm conflicted... Part of me wants the mc to find Marshall, but I also want Xavier to be happy, and I know he likes the mc. Just pls, don't make it so marshall turns out to be a Faded, and the mc has to kill him. It would ruin the entirety of what I have left of my mental health.
Yeah, I think so too. He even introduced a masked figure to mess with our heads, but it would be too convenient. + The Osiphirus guy seems to have a long straight tail, and Marshall's was curly. By the time mc realizes he fell in love with Xavier, he'll probably go like "I knew it all along, I just couldn't let myself believe it" or smt.
I dunno man, MC x Xavier was pretty much my canon ship from the start. Marshall didn't have much of character or sceen time so I didn't really care about him that much.
i know i'm replying to a year old comment but Marshall is a very strong character, he's basically Dorian's(the mc) whole motivation. this is why we don't currently get romance over Dorian x Xavier cuz 1, Dorian doesn't want romance since he believes that Marshall will wait for him and 2, Dorian is literally grieving at this point
Damn I just read the Lost Entries: "Birthday" and damn it made me so sad.
Spoilers:
It's been a while since I last read the novel, and I completely forgot that Xavier was trapped by himself in the bunker and I thought that he did something wrong with his parents. THAT DAMN BIRTHDAY WISH MADE ME TEAR UP! XAVIER, YOU WILL NEVER BE ALONE AGAIN!
I'm really glad I finally decided to read this, and I could hardly put it down once I'd started. This is quite an interesting story, and it's not lacking in the slightest in the intrigue department. As always, a good story makes you asks questions and this one certainly did that. I look forward to what the future brings for this VN, and if you've been holding off on reading it- here's the sign to start.
Current Scoreboard: (things in () are unofficial)
Xavier: 3 (+1 fooled Dorian about wing history, + 1 for wrinkle joke, + 1 nail polish)
Dorian: 1 (+ 1 gaydar for bat, +1 for form correction)
Raya: 1
I would LOVE an official scoreboard at some point.
I came it expected another my wolf love story. Not only did you subvert my expectation, you blew it out of this world. A competent human mc(for once), Xavier is precious and i will rain hell fire if something happen to him next update. The story is basically Love and Monster so I am living for every second and yet somehow you make it even better with horror element, world building and excellent writing. This is a must read for me.
This VN is just absolutely phenomenal, everything about it is fucking amazing so far and i eagerly await the day we get to beat the shit out of Allistair
Please continue to make updates for this VN, the storyline doesn't feel rushed, but rushed in a way that makes sense since things can occur so quickly in an apocalypse and life in general. Also the dialogue and characters are well made. Great VN.
Oh wow, it has been a long time since the last time i read a VN that has a MC as loyal as this story and it's so moving! The story is balanced and is highly recommended in my opinion :D
Keep up the good works everyone! looking forward to Build 5!
okay I just reached the 'to be continued' and hhhhhhhhh I don't usually leave comments but the humour? Fantastic. Characters? Yes very good. Romance? Slow and steady and believable. Horror? Sparse and solid. And the writing, barring like one mistaken 'it's' instead of 'its' and (not even technically writing) the coding error that happened with large font size i.e. ""xyz"", was amazing too.
I hope this will continue , the story is absolutely amazing and I love the way that it's going so far and I can't wait to see what the next build has for the future
Consider me enthralled. Talk about a unique setting, good on ya for having no spoilers in the description or pics.
While the pacing wasn't perfect at the beginning, I feel like you guys really come into your own in the middle of build 2. I haven't experienced such good and engaging writing since Echo, the art keeps the vibe of what's going on really well, and the writing has the exact right amount of tension and realistic character interactions building up chemistry.
The in depth talk about philosophy/big topics is apparently a turn off for some people, but honestly I love it, it's very evocative of some of my favorite visual novel works from Uchikoshi, the creator of the zero escape and AI somnium files series. I'd say keep true to your vision there myself.
Hope more people come to see how good this is, also you guys are killing it with the quantity of content as well, for it being build 3 there's a lot to read, yet again another example of your guys' professional quality. Will definitely be recommending more people to this.
It's not about it being a death game/escape room that's just surface level observation of genre, it's the way the vn is written, as I explained in my comment. The way people talk to each other, the little things brought up, I got into this fresh off of AI somnium files 2 so I felt those vibes hard when reading this haha.
And again, if the author is reading this, I do not mean it in a bad way at all, I'm not saying you're copying it or anything, I mean it as a compliment, Uchikoshi's work is very engaging and I find myself being engaged in a similar way that's tickling my brain in the same way, they may have not even read any of his VNs and it just be a total coincidence haha c:
I'm not sure if I've given my thoughts on this VN yet, but here I go.
Overall, the basis for this story is quite unique within the furry visual novel community. The writing style is quite bland, but it suits the story well enough. I enjoy the somewhat original take on zombies, even if I wish it was a different version of an apocalypse. The MC is also extremely bland and has zero personality. I still enjoy the VN tho. I've noticed around 8 typos in the 3rd build that need to be fixed.
One complaint I have with the latest build is that Xavier's monologue near the end feels extremely forced and out of character. It genuinely just feels like the author spouting a bunch of nonsense, and not the character trying to explain his mental ills. Mayhaps, you should rewrite that section to sound more natural and in character for Xavier.
Ahh~ UwU these updates just keep getting better and better! :3 I really love the direction xou're taking the story :p and kudos on the Adastra reference n_~
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Dang another good VN gone up in smoke.
Hey Mash you doing ok?
You can't just give us an amazing story like this and disappear. Plsss come back I miss your vn. Hoping for an update soon.
Really hope the Quad gets to escape in the next update.
Hey Mash what going on, how you doing?
DZAMN WHEN UPDATE😭👉👈 THAT CLIFFHANGER IS CLIFFHANGING😭😭😭😭
ask on their dc
When is the next update?
I see the comments below and I will see above. The thing is: I hope a trisal here😎
The illustrated by Link on the page doesn't work anymore looks like @T0biArts is their new Twitter name. They do such a good job check them out.
Was trying to download the new update but maybe I did it wrong? got this error message
sorry not letting me upload it heh
I'm conflicted... Part of me wants the mc to find Marshall, but I also want Xavier to be happy, and I know he likes the mc. Just pls, don't make it so marshall turns out to be a Faded, and the mc has to kill him. It would ruin the entirety of what I have left of my mental health.
Yeah, I think so too. He even introduced a masked figure to mess with our heads, but it would be too convenient. + The Osiphirus guy seems to have a long straight tail, and Marshall's was curly. By the time mc realizes he fell in love with Xavier, he'll probably go like "I knew it all along, I just couldn't let myself believe it" or smt.
I dunno man, MC x Xavier was pretty much my canon ship from the start. Marshall didn't have much of character or sceen time so I didn't really care about him that much.
i know i'm replying to a year old comment but Marshall is a very strong character, he's basically Dorian's(the mc) whole motivation. this is why we don't currently get romance over Dorian x Xavier cuz 1, Dorian doesn't want romance since he believes that Marshall will wait for him and 2, Dorian is literally grieving at this point
THIS IS SO GOOD OH MY GOODNESS
Love the game
P.S.
Don't you dare make it so a plot twist happens where Marshal is one of those monsters that you have to kill
God this game make me burst in tears
The storytelling is as good as always, I will never grow tired of the story!
Looking forward toward Build 6 and the Lost Entry as well.
Just finished the story,and I love Xavier,hope he'll be ok.My heart will broken if something bad happen to him.
Is mentioned what happens to Xavier parents when he was trapped in the bunker?
Damn I just read the Lost Entries: "Birthday" and damn it made me so sad.
Spoilers:
It's been a while since I last read the novel, and I completely forgot that Xavier was trapped by himself in the bunker and I thought that he did something wrong with his parents. THAT DAMN BIRTHDAY WISH MADE ME TEAR UP! XAVIER, YOU WILL NEVER BE ALONE AGAIN!
I just finished reading and I love this vn
Spoilers:
I can't stop thinking about that... Scene
"Do butterflies eat meat?"
And the lifeless corpse within the swarm of butterflies
poor kid 😭😭😭
One of the few vn's that made me cry, great job on the story, can't wait for the next update
P.S. Xavier best boi
I'm really glad I finally decided to read this, and I could hardly put it down once I'd started. This is quite an interesting story, and it's not lacking in the slightest in the intrigue department. As always, a good story makes you asks questions and this one certainly did that. I look forward to what the future brings for this VN, and if you've been holding off on reading it- here's the sign to start.
Current Scoreboard: (things in () are unofficial)
Xavier: 3 (+1 fooled Dorian about wing history, + 1 for wrinkle joke, + 1 nail polish)
Dorian: 1 (+ 1 gaydar for bat, +1 for form correction)
Raya: 1
I would LOVE an official scoreboard at some point.
I came it expected another my wolf love story. Not only did you subvert my expectation, you blew it out of this world. A competent human mc(for once), Xavier is precious and i will rain hell fire if something happen to him next update. The story is basically Love and Monster so I am living for every second and yet somehow you make it even better with horror element, world building and excellent writing. This is a must read for me.
Amazing vn so far but I’m curious about something. Unless it’s a spoiler, whose relationship is endgame when it comes to the mc? Xavier or Marshall?
Definitely a spoiler but I appreciate your support! All will be revealed in due time
This VN is just absolutely phenomenal, everything about it is fucking amazing so far and i eagerly await the day we get to beat the shit out of Allistair
Please continue to make updates for this VN, the storyline doesn't feel rushed, but rushed in a way that makes sense since things can occur so quickly in an apocalypse and life in general. Also the dialogue and characters are well made. Great VN.
People 1 yoctasecond without their zaza become the Faded
Oh wow, it has been a long time since the last time i read a VN that has a MC as loyal as this story and it's so moving! The story is balanced and is highly recommended in my opinion :D
Keep up the good works everyone! looking forward to Build 5!
MY HEART
THIS UPDATE WAS IMMACULATE. I can't wait for more.
Very promising so far. I loved the relationship between to two main characters.
okay I just reached the 'to be continued' and hhhhhhhhh I don't usually leave comments but the humour? Fantastic. Characters? Yes very good. Romance? Slow and steady and believable. Horror? Sparse and solid. And the writing, barring like one mistaken 'it's' instead of 'its' and (not even technically writing) the coding error that happened with large font size i.e. ""xyz"", was amazing too.
spoiler
"Height: Approx. 10ft (When on all fours)"
This line genuinely gave me chills. Wow this game. *Cheff's kiss*
Oh my.. the story is heavy but good and unique....
the MC is very strong and the emotion journal really stirr the feels, I hope marshall is okay tho..
I'm excited for the next update, this vn deserve a good good ⭐ eh..
OMG! I LOVE THIS VISUAL NOVEL!!! I can't wait for more of it in the coming days!
xavier <3
I hope this will continue , the story is absolutely amazing and I love the way that it's going so far and I can't wait to see what the next build has for the future
Consider me enthralled. Talk about a unique setting, good on ya for having no spoilers in the description or pics.
While the pacing wasn't perfect at the beginning, I feel like you guys really come into your own in the middle of build 2. I haven't experienced such good and engaging writing since Echo, the art keeps the vibe of what's going on really well, and the writing has the exact right amount of tension and realistic character interactions building up chemistry.
The in depth talk about philosophy/big topics is apparently a turn off for some people, but honestly I love it, it's very evocative of some of my favorite visual novel works from Uchikoshi, the creator of the zero escape and AI somnium files series. I'd say keep true to your vision there myself.
Hope more people come to see how good this is, also you guys are killing it with the quantity of content as well, for it being build 3 there's a lot to read, yet again another example of your guys' professional quality. Will definitely be recommending more people to this.
Wait what does Uchi has to do with it? He was always developing death games/escape room type of vns while this appears to be slice of life drama…
It's not about it being a death game/escape room that's just surface level observation of genre, it's the way the vn is written, as I explained in my comment. The way people talk to each other, the little things brought up, I got into this fresh off of AI somnium files 2 so I felt those vibes hard when reading this haha.
And again, if the author is reading this, I do not mean it in a bad way at all, I'm not saying you're copying it or anything, I mean it as a compliment, Uchikoshi's work is very engaging and I find myself being engaged in a similar way that's tickling my brain in the same way, they may have not even read any of his VNs and it just be a total coincidence haha c:
so first you break our heart with build 1, now you break our hope and soul with build 2?
that terror, this despair and the crushing loneliness? you nailed it mash
I'm not sure if I've given my thoughts on this VN yet, but here I go.
Overall, the basis for this story is quite unique within the furry visual novel community. The writing style is quite bland, but it suits the story well enough. I enjoy the somewhat original take on zombies, even if I wish it was a different version of an apocalypse. The MC is also extremely bland and has zero personality. I still enjoy the VN tho. I've noticed around 8 typos in the 3rd build that need to be fixed.
One complaint I have with the latest build is that Xavier's monologue near the end feels extremely forced and out of character. It genuinely just feels like the author spouting a bunch of nonsense, and not the character trying to explain his mental ills. Mayhaps, you should rewrite that section to sound more natural and in character for Xavier.
In conclusion, I'd give this VN a 3/5. Also, I'll attach my playthrough of the game here: https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLs_BZI-CHxZw45igG8Sw4WUJx5-k95nkp
-Kallier
Ahh~ UwU these updates just keep getting better and better! :3 I really love the direction xou're taking the story :p and kudos on the Adastra reference n_~